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My Best Friend Brother My Bestfriend Brother Book 2 eBook MJ Thompson

The storyline is a pretty predictable and I could tell the way the book was pretty much going to go by the end of the first few chapters. There were also noticeable writing mistakes throughout the book, even within the very first few chapters of the book. Usually a few mistakes aren't a big deal to me but these were quite noticeable and would have been easily fixed if the book had been edited before it was published.Not only was the storyline a little bland, the way the writer wrote the story in the different characters' points of views was annoying. Don't get me wrong, I do like knowing what different characters are thinking but I do not like how the author wrote the points of views within this story. When the story would switch points of views, I had to reread the same scenes I read a few pages back but now in a different person's view. This was annoying to me because it made me have to reread scenes that already happened. Though these scenes were slightly different due to it being in a different point of view, it made reading the story odd and at times even boring because I already read that scene. I feel that different point of views are great in certain stories, but they should be used in different scenes, they should never be used to essentially go back into scenes that the reader has already read. That's what really bothered me the most when reading this book, it's just made the story seem almost immature. Overall, with the writing mistakes, the bland writing, the repeating scenes, and the predictable plot, I felt like I was reading a story made by a first time writer. It didn't feel like I was actually reading a published novel or book. I read this book because I was able to download it for free on amazon but I would never actually pay money for this book, not even if it was simply worth a dollar. It's just not worth it. I'm sorry to the writer but it seems she still has a lot of work to do before she should publish another book.


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My Best Friend Brother My Bestfriend Brother Book 2 eBook MJ Thompson Reviews

Amazing!!
i read this book on wattpad and i love it i read some the comments on the one star its kind of true but it doesnt bother me
Amazing book!!
There is a little bit if grammar fails but to my taste, I like it. The small things that went wrong in the book, should make the author try harder.
I read on wattpad and continued it here it was great,I believe she is one of the best authors I know! Great book-MBFB
While the storyline was cute you had to read a lot of unnecessary things over again because it was one of those stories that goes from one person to the next person in the thoughts or their version of what happened only was exactly what you just read from the other person.

Overall the story was cute in a Tweeny kind of way. Not really my thing if you're not into young adult stories it's probably not good for you.
I first read this on Wattpad. But bought it in not only support to this author but to be able to reread it again. This is a YA story about Hope who has a crush/love interest in her best friend older brother. And the trauma she endured when he and his twin pulled way too many pranks when they were younger. Now she is just days away from her eighteenth birthday and they reconnect after several years absence. Will they get together or has there been too much pain involved? Has Nate a chance or will his younger brother get the girl? Again this was a sweet romance that was not a deep read but an enjoyable look at young romance.
The storyline is a pretty predictable and I could tell the way the book was pretty much going to go by the end of the first few chapters. There were also noticeable writing mistakes throughout the book, even within the very first few chapters of the book. Usually a few mistakes aren't a big deal to me but these were quite noticeable and would have been easily fixed if the book had been edited before it was published.Not only was the storyline a little bland, the way the writer wrote the story in the different characters' points of views was annoying. Don't get me wrong, I do like knowing what different characters are thinking but I do not like how the author wrote the points of views within this story. When the story would switch points of views, I had to reread the same scenes I read a few pages back but now in a different person's view. This was annoying to me because it made me have to reread scenes that already happened. Though these scenes were slightly different due to it being in a different point of view, it made reading the story odd and at times even boring because I already read that scene. I feel that different point of views are great in certain stories, but they should be used in different scenes, they should never be used to essentially go back into scenes that the reader has already read. That's what really bothered me the most when reading this book, it's just made the story seem almost immature. Overall, with the writing mistakes, the bland writing, the repeating scenes, and the predictable plot, I felt like I was reading a story made by a first time writer. It didn't feel like I was actually reading a published novel or book. I read this book because I was able to download it for free on but I would never actually pay money for this book, not even if it was simply worth a dollar. It's just not worth it. I'm sorry to the writer but it seems she still has a lot of work to do before she should publish another book.